Geary gave my narrative back with a stack of other papers. I don't know if she meant to, and I didn't realize it until I looked at them later. But I started a revision, according to her myriad notes. There were a few things I didn't understand, so I will have to go ask her. We spent over an hour in her office on Wednesday, discussing the character flaws of George Lucas ("He is dead to me.") and other things.